Breaking the Surface
10 years ago
1. | absence or suppression of passion, emotion, or excitement. |
2. | lack of interest in or concern for things that others find moving or exciting. |
3. | Also, ap⋅a⋅thei⋅a, ap⋅a⋅thi⋅a Stoicism. freedom from emotion of any kind. |
6 comments:
That sounds good, I do like how you go back and forth between the past and the present.
ageed love the idea of flash back
The back and forth didn't bother me but if you want to put the flashback in that would be fine too.
Whatever works for me. I didn't find it confusing, but i guess it could become confusing depending on how the story turns.
-Blogreader
I like how I go back and forth too, and I thought it was pretty clear, but reading the posts I have written I think it may get a little fuzzy. I figured just saying Flashback: and then whatever title I have in the little title box will just make it so nobody gets confused.
Good idea.
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